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 title: Gozer the ghost
 ---
 
-Not quite sure what to say about this. It was three weeks or so before Halloween. And I was 
-working on a different pattern. And then the thought of a traditional ghost costume popped
+Not quite sure what to say about this. It was three weeks or so before Halloween, and I was 
+working on a different pattern. Then the thought of a traditional ghost costume popped
 into my head. 
 
 So as a joke I made this, just so I could post it on the discord server. And then Joost asked